新寫的開心歌來囉～i wrote a new song!
這首的開頭很特別，老師特別選了幾首haiku詩的開頭（只有三行的英文排句詩）要我們直接把這些字當作一整首創作的開頭～！原本想說三句要怎麼接啊(有時候不平衡感會給人家不安定的感覺，比較適合桑心歌)？通常我們開心時都習慣雙數句，既然當天感覺很快樂我就直接接給他第四句囉！旋律與歌詞也就這樣慢慢出來了:D
---以下歌詞---
"Sometimes i want less
less clothing, less waiting
less words and less space"
between us
i wanna feel your chest
lifting and falling
as i place my cheek against
your heartbeat, i'm hoping
it's beating as fast
so can you come a little bit closer?
and let our hands touch each others'
oh baby can you please just tell me
what i'm thinking is what you're thinking cause i'm
dying to unravel your mind tonight
oh baby could you please just tell me
that i'm the reason you can't sleep at night
so don't leave me hanging here
we can't waste no more time!
lyrics: Tyler Knott Gregson's Haiku+Dena
music: Dena
超喜歡這裏各式各樣的挑戰woohoo!!
#Berklee #songwriting #original #ahhappysong #eeek
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